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A Week In Hellby ~DOLFIY

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ASDFGHJKL!>:C
Guys seriously,I'm having a bad week this week and this probably a
vent art showing how do I look now... :<
Anyway,this is my schedule last week :
1st day : English homework + Bahasa homework
2nd day : Computer test (gee! it's so hard!D: )
3rd day : Mandarin test + physic homework + Biology homework
4th day : P.E test
5th day : Physic homework (oh my...D: )
and the next week, I'm gonna have tryout // tests in three days!D:
It's awful for me to be a grade A student...I want to be a grade B...;A;
I'm so dead now..X_X

Drawn in SAI (4 hours..)

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Submitted on: January 27
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Critique by *PeterDonahue Jan 28, 2013, 1:53:15 PM

I like the style--it gives the feel of a Disney-Renaissance movie, in the way the character is outlined and shaded contrasting against the more painterly background. However, I think the overall style is somewhat indecisive in its level of detail. The accents of fur texture on the fox show some technical skill, but the areas where the texture have been added make the light source and therefore the three-dimensional shape and volume of the fox ambiguous. Applying the fur texture more evenly, or with more attention to how it could define the underlying anatomy, would have helped.

I'm a little bothered by the way the front paws seem to be resting on a flat surface, but instead appear over a fence. Draping the fox over the beam gives you LOTS of opportunity to show his weight, and how he's carrying himself low, feeling sad. Here's a suggestion for how that might look: :thumb351148167:

The expression, though, perfectly captures the downtrodden feeling. In that regard I think this piece of art is very effective. Nice job! But matching him to the background would have really driven it home.

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